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Originally posted by skeevy420 View Post
In all fairness, Phoronix could use an editor. For example, I think your issue would have been solve by putting all the new features in a list instead of in paragraph form. It also doesn't help that Michael has a unique writing style that tends to add extra words which can make articles harder to decipher at times.
Take that first block of the article. While there aren't any typos, "otherwise while also" should be "while" or "while also" since "otherwise" makes no sense in the given context. "Otherwise" what? Extra words add unnecessary confusion. I'd completely remove "for those wanting" and "some". I'd also change "sane defaults and getting the Arch Linux" to "sane defaults to get the Arch Linux" just to cut down the number of and's in the sentence.
After my editing that first sentence would become:
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Originally posted by mirmirmir View Post
poor michael got destroyed lmao
That effect happens to all writers; especially those like Michael who may write four or five essays in a given day. Moreover, that effect affects anyone who hyper-focuses on a task for a long period of time regardless of industry or task at hand. For writing, editors, copy writers, and/or fact checkers normally catch issues like that because it can be very, very hard to do those roles when you're also the primary writer. The only way to make it easier on him would be for Michael to write all his articles, wait 24 to 48 hours, and then play editor. Waiting, for most people, can be essential to get the tunnel vision gone and properly edit without the story in your head filling in the blanks you're trying to find.
I wish know how to submit new words. I'd like to propose the word "anor" to mean "and/or".
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ha... I used to really like arch install script, but i've been seeing more and more arch users who don't even know how to check what network system they are using. I haven't used the script for a while. but still see people who aren't using network manager every now and then
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